02.10 Kick It Up a Notch

PLZ DO THE REVISED PARAGRAPH AND THE REFLECTION

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You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made.
View the grading rubric as you complete your work. This is your guide to a super submission.
Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise.
Copy this paragraph into a new document.
Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors. Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improve your writing.
the original paragraph
the revised paragraph
the reflection on the changes you have made
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original paragraph-
Have you ever seen a vulture before? Well even if you haven’t you have most likely seen an image of the bald creature. These birds feed of dead animal’s carcasses, making them ‘’a necessary and positive part of nature,’’ says M.E White, author of ‘’Vultures make life difficult’’.
These birds have inflicted damage on neighborhoods by, destroying car’s paint, nib
bling the wheels, and chewing the caulking on the windows. Putting a stop to their
detriment to peoples properties is crucial. Putting up deterrents and even contacting the U.S Wildlife Service are options to help stop these vultures from causing
more damage to our homes.


revised paragraph-




reflection-

Answer:

These birds have inflicted damage on neighborhoods by, destroying car’s paint, nibbling the wheels, and chewing the caulking on the windows. Putting a stop to their detriment to peoples properties is crucial. Putting up deterrents and even contacting the U.S Wildlife Service are options to help stop these vultures from causing more damage to our homes.

Explanation:

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Answer:

These birds have inflicted damage on neighborhoods by, destroying car’s paint, nibbling the wheels, and chewing the caulking on the windows. Putting a stop to their detriment to peoples properties is crucial. Putting up deterrents and even contacting the U.S Wildlife Service are options to help stop these vultures from causing more damage to our homes.

Explanation:

Unit 5 - Modifiers Name_____________________ READ: Direct Object: Receives the action of the verb. Answers the question WHAT? It will always be a noun or pronoun. Adjective: Modifies a noun/pronoun. Answers the questions “which one”, “what kind”, how many” Adverb: -Modifies an action verb. Answers the questions “where”, “when”, “how” the action occurs -Modifies an adjective or other adverb. Tells “to what extent” Adjective Phrase: prepositional phrase that acts like an adjective. (see adjective notes above) Adverb Phrase: prepositional phrase that acts like an adverb. (see adverb notes above) Using KAMI, Label each sentence (S, AV, DO, ADJ, ADV and highlight phrases – Adj,(green) & Adv (blue) S AV ADV ADJ DO EX) The dog in my yard ate the very big bones from the pork roast during dinner. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 1. The player in the red jersey ran around the bases. 2. Members of my family donated money yesterday to our church. 3. Mice throughout the barn are easily stealing cheese from the small children. 4. My extremely handsome husband stirred the boiling spaghetti before dinner. 5. The precious child gave his loving mother a hug at bedtime.

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Can you write me a short entertaining story about dogs? It has to be fictional. Also please don't take it off of google. THANNK YOUUU!!!!

I STG STOP BEING SO ANNOYING CHASING FOR QUESTIONS WITH THE MOST POINTS!

Which quotation best shows the kind of fighters the Japanese soldiers are?

“Monsters, not human beings” (95).

“One of their first duties was to fight to the death” (96).

“Most were common laborers” (96).

“They were pathetic” (97).

which version best uses variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow and writing style of a story?
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Where is fallacious reasoning most often found?

a. n advertisements, newscasts, articles, political speeches, and interviews
b. in advertisements, literature, biographies, political speeches, and blog posts
c. in literature, television shows, interviews, talk shows, and newscasts
d. in newscasts, articles, movies, television shows, and political speeches

In chapter 1, something frightened Jonas. What was it?
A.He was thinking of the upcoming Ceremony of 12.
B.An aircraft flew over the community and everyone was told to go into the nearest building.
C.His friend Asher was late for school and had to apologize.
D.His father told him about a baby who might have to be released.

Create the chorus of a song about a fragile or delicate object.

What is unusual about the animals? From the land lady

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How did the voyages of Christopher Columbus differ from earlier voyages to the Americas?
Group of answer choices

He was the first explorer to leave a written account of his journey.

His voyages led to trade between the Eastern and Western hemispheres.

He reached Asia by crossing the Atlantic Ocean.

He was the first explorer to sail from Europe to the Americas.

What are the main topics of this novel?
Group of answer choices

wealth and power

kindness, and diversity

fear and losing hope

good and bad

Write a short paragraph citing evidence from the text to show that Sara was a good storyteller.

Please write your answer in complete sentences.


Text:The power that Lavinia and certain other girls were most envious of, and at the same time most fascinated by in spite of themselves, was her power of telling stories and of making everything she talked about seem like a story, whether it was one or not. Any one who has been at school with a teller of stories knows what the wonder means—how he or she is followed about and besought in a whisper to relate romances; how groups gather round and hang on the outskirts of the favored party in the hope of being allowed to join it and listen.

Sara not only could tell stories, but she adored telling them. When she sat or stood in the midst of a circle and began to invent wonderful things, her green eyes grew big and shining, her cheeks flushed, and, without knowing that she was doing it, she began to act and made what she told lovely or alarming by the raising or dropping of her voice, the bend and sway of her slim body, and the dramatic movement of her hands. She forgot that she was talking to listening children; she saw and lived with the fairy folk, or the kings and queens and beautiful ladies, whose adventures she was narrating. Sometimes when she had finished her story, she was quite out of breath with excitement, and would lay her hand on her thin, little, quick-rising chest, and half laugh as if at herself.

The most effective tool for making a project schedule is a ____________ .

A.) notebook
B.) calculator
C.) canlender
D.) graph

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After finding a feather, you examine it closely for markings and then measure its length and width. What scientific task are you performing?
a hypothesis
a theory
an observation
a dependent variable

I picked the careers of becoming a fashion designer and a surgical technologist because those are two things I look forward to doing when I grow up because at the age I am now I really enjoy drawing so fashion ideas I have and just drawing in general and I have also told my siblings very many times that I have always wanted to become either a nurse, a doctor, or a surgen. The most important thing I look for in a career is mostly people because I have always had this thing for helping people when they are sad, depressed, sick, hurt, or is having family issues. I mostly like to help people because my friends have always told me I am always the happiest person they know, which is true. I am usually always a happy person. So that is how and why I chose the surgical technologist career. The reason I chose the Fashion designer career is that I have always loved to dress up, and in that career, I get to dress up other people which would make me happy. And also because I am usually full of wild and crazy ideas when it comes to fashion. Although now that I am in my teens I am not much to dress in dresses and skirts anymore, I will wear them at some time when I'm in town but that mostly in summer. Well, anyway that is why I chose the fashion designing career. There are more reasons of why I want to do the two careers i chose

is this good enough for a paragraph?

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In what style was Prometheus Unbound written?
narrative prose
verse
blank verse
iambic pentameter

What do you do when that person you are mad at apologizes for something
A)you forgive them
B)you don't talk to them till the next day
C)Or just ignore them forever

Sketch the character of the protagonist from the lesson “Hearts and Hands in about 100 words

Answer these very simple questions for points.
1. Have u ever boke a bone?
2. Have u ever punched someone in the face?
3. Have u ever made up a story?
5. Have u ever lied to ur parents?

Based on details from The Riddle of the Rosetta Stone, what is an effect of the hieroglyphs and the Greek alphabet appearing together on the slab?

It suggests others discovered the Rosetta Stone before the French and wrote on it.
It provides an opportunity to decipher the unknown hieroglyphs by matching them to the known Greek language.
It explains why the British are so determined to stop the French invasion of Egypt.
It proves the theory that the Egyptians had invaded and conquered Greece centuries before.

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Which statement about the Yeehats in The Call of the Wild is true?

The Yeehats’ power and pride are static.

The Yeehats’ tradition of hunting is dynamic.

The Yeehats are static because they do not fight back against Buck.

The Yeehats are dynamic because their excitement is replaced with fear.

Is the adjective clause in this sentence restrictive or nonrestrictive?

The puppy that came to our back door was cold and hungry.

nonrestrictive
restrictive

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Who does Curly call to the site to get rid of the infestation?
What happens once he arrives?
***PLEASE TELL ME WHAT HE DID ONCE HE ARRIVED***
(The book is hoot and it's chapter nine
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So I did open my mouth, and you know I did scream, and when I demanded what I was supposed to have and what I was entitled to, they still would not give it to me.

Identify one type of rhetorical devices used in paragraph and what sentence is it?

which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow and writing style of a story?

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Read the diary entries.

Nicholas’s Diary: April 2 and 3

Friday, April 2

Well, it’s only 10 more hours until my father and I leave for our treasure hunt. Every Saturday morning for as long as I can remember I have seen him leave, always by himself, to look for treasure. I have always longed to go with him, and he’s always told me that someday I would get the chance. I was so excited when he told me I would finally have my chance that I was bouncing off the walls like a rubber ball and springing from one place to the next the rest of the day.

He has always been as quiet as a mouse about the treasure that he finds, scurrying away with his equipment in the morning and piling up his treasure in his study. Even though he says he always comes home with something, he has never shown it to me or even told me what type of treasure it is. Is it gold, or silver, or maybe it’s precious jewels? Whatever it is, tomorrow I will find out, and hopefully he’ll let me bring some to class so that I can show my friends since I’ve been bragging about it to them ever since Dad told me I could go!

Saturday, April 3

The treasure hunt was fun, but it was not what I expected. Dad and I left early in the morning and headed for the same woods that we sometimes go hiking in on Sundays. I never would have thought they hold treasure, but what was really odd was when Dad told me to leave the shovels at home because we wouldn’t need them. But what he did bring with him was a bright yellow GPS . I had seen it in his truck many times before. I always wondered what he did with it. Today I found out.

Dad and I wandered into the woods, first staying on the hiking path I had taken several times before and then veering off the path. The forest was like a statue; it was still and covered in damp moss and dead leaves; it didn't even seem alive. It appeared that no one had been there for a long time so I knew that this treasure must be old and far under the ground. How were we going to get to it without shovels?

As Dad kept his eyes on the GPS , I looked around, and suddenly I noticed a patch of leaves that was disturbed and a log that looked like it had been moved. When I asked Dad about it, his eyes lit up, and he said he saw the treasure. He reached under the log and pulled out a plastic box with a label that read “Official Geocache.”

I didn’t know what an official geocache was, but I soon found out when Dad opened it. Inside was a little notebook and a bunch of small items like a set of dice, a toy car, and a large silver dollar. Dad said that he thought the toy car was cool, so he took it out and put it in his pocket and then pulled a golf ball from his other pocket and put it in the box. He wrote his name and my name in the little notebook and then closed the box and put it back where he found it.

Geocaching, which is what Dad later told me this type of treasure hunting is called, was much different than digging for gold in the ground. But I thought it was fun, and I hope Dad takes me again next Saturday.

Part A

In "Nicholas's Diary: April 2 and 3," what is Nicholas’s first thought when he and his father leave home to go treasure hunting?


It is not going to be the type of treasure hunt that he thought it would be.

He will not be finding gold or silver, but something far more important.

He will not have a very good story to tell his friends at practice on Monday.

The treasure will be carefully hidden and closely guarded.
Question 2
Part B

Which sentence from the text best supports the answer in Part A?


“…what was really odd was when Dad told me to leave the shovels at home because he said we wouldn’t need them.”

“As Dad kept his eyes on the GPS , I looked around, and suddenly I noticed a patch of leaves that was disturbed and a log that looked like it had been moved.”

“Dad and I left early in the morning and headed for the same woods that we sometimes go hiking in on Sundays.”

"The forest was like a statue; it was still and covered in damp moss and dead leaves; it didn't even seem alive."

Read this passage about seals and sea lions and then answer the question that follows:

From a distance, they both look like seals, but once you get up close you can actually see the difference. Seals and sea lions are both fish-loving mammals. Moreover, handy flippers propel them both through the water. But while seals have a tiny opening on the side of their heads, sea lions have actual earflaps. Furthermore, sea lions use their back flippers like feet to scoot along the beach. On the other hand, seals must wriggle and roll to get ahead. On the whole, when you visit a zoo or theme park, it's the honking, barking, funny sea lion you're likely to find playing to the crowds for fishy treats, earflaps and all.

In the passage about seals and sea lions, which transition is used to add an idea?

A. However
B. Moreover
C. On the whole
D. While