3. Revise this paragraph from the essay on vegetarianism, which focuses on one of the claim's supporting reasons. As you revise the paragraph, focus on:
making sure the point of the paragraph is precise and related to the overall claim in the essay,
using words, phrases, and clauses to link major ideas in the paragraph,
organizing ideas in a logical way,
stating and addressing a counterclaim,
maintaining a formal style and objective tone, and
correcting MLA citation errors.
Underline any portions of the original paragraph that you include in your version of the paragraph. (30 points).

Answer:

Explanation:

Vegetarians meet the nutrient requirements from eating from a variety of foods within different food groups (fruits, vegetables, grains, proteins). Although, No More Vegetarians claims vegetarians are not healthy because they do not meet protein requirements (Evans 22). Contrary to this book, vegetarians get adequate levels of protein through beans, tofu, legumes, and protein-rich grains. Furthermore, Tim Over, a nutritionist, has found that people who rarely consume meat in their diets are much less likely to become sick than those who regularly eat meat (Tim Over 66). For, plant foods are a reliable source of energy that the human body relies on to maintain proper health (Vegetarianism for Everyone 45). It is a well-known belief inside the nutrition field that vegetarianism is sustainable whilst being healthy.

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According to the third paragraph of Chapter I of Nature, how does Emerson define the poet’s view of nature?
The poet views nature as something that is made by humans.
The poet is the only one who genuinely works in nature.
The poet sees something in nature that cannot be quantified.
The poet is the only one who notices humans’ effect on nature.

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Put these in order:

A. Select the best solution.
B. State the problem.
C. List possible solutions.
D. Evaluate possible solutions.
E. Consider all factors.

Read this excerpt from Rudolfo Anaya's essay "Take the Tortillas Out of Your Poetry."
Tortillas and poetry. They go hand in hand. Books nourish the spirit, bread nourishes our bodies. Our distinct
cultures nourish each one of us, and as we know more and more about the art and literature of the different cultures,
we become freer and freer....
I don't know anyone who doesn't like to sample different ethnic foods, the breads of many many groups; just as
many of us enjoy sampling books from different areas of the world. I travel to foreign countries, and I know more
about myself as I learn more about my fellow human beings. Censorship imposes itself in my path of knowledge, and
that activity can be justified by no one.
Which of these changes would make this excerpt more argumentative?
using words that affect the audience's sense of trust
O using less repetition of certain words and phrases
O including words that address logic and reason
O including words that are charged with emotion

Which context clue provides the best hint for the meaning of the underlined idiom in this excerpt?

A. but Laura’s invents days were over

B. the rolling suitcase everyone else in the family remembers

C. Yoyo thinks of the speech her mother wrote as her last invention

D. after that her mother had passed on to Yoyo her pencil and pad

what’s the best way to start a paper/essay about a place to visit?

Which of the following is true?
A. An interview is an informal type of communication.
B. In the workplace, it is important to interact only with people you know.
C. Employers look for people who look and behave like professionals.
D. Interacting well with others in the workplace is not a priority.

Alone, lying with her face in the sand dunes of what was once the James River, Clark's body heaves in dehydration and despair. Why was she saved? Why is she Noah's sacrificial lamb? The raging sun beating down on her cracked, burning flesh feeds the flame of her heart. Clark suddenly forces herself to her knees, throwing sand to an invisible enemy: "Why?! I give up! I'm done! I have given you everything: my parents, my friends, my home!" She screeches in sullen surrender. Silence soon echos back to her like a child mocking a parent's demands, until the is a sudden squawk. Clark spins in the sand, searching for the first since of other life she was seen in weeks. Then, in the distance, shadowed by the same powerful star that has scorched her body in blisters, a bird, a blessing in disguise, soars in grace.


Which best describes the word choice in this passage?

Consistently negative connotations

Consistently positive connotations

Shifts from positive to negative connotations

Shifts from negative to positive connotations

For what is the major being treated at the hospital?


A. a broken foot

B. pneumonia

C. an injured hand

D. a head wound

First-generation college students from working-class backgrounds may ____________.

In the last line, how does David's throat tightening and his attempting

to hold back tears characterize the father?

A)

It shows that David is angry and is tired of trying to

do things right for his son and wife.

B)

It shows that David is really too emotional and gets

upset far too easily than any man should.

C)

It reveals that David is ashamed of his son and ex-

wife and wishes both of them would change their

ways.

It reveals that David feels happy at his son's

D) happiness and sorrowful at his not spending time

with him.

According to "Teen Researchers Defend Media Multitasking," what is a "high media multitasker"?

Which is the best statement of the theme of the story?

7. Will you tell me when
O its
O it's midnight?

55 Point MULTIPLE CHOICE / Will Impact On Other Homeschoolers / Will Mark Brainliest

Drag each tile to the correct box.
In which order do the events occur?

Alice follows the White Rabbit
down the passage into a large room.

Alice finds a small door behind
a curtain which she unlocks, but it
is too small for her to fit inside.

Alice finds a bottle which says
"Drink Me," but reads it carefully
before deciding to take any action.

Alice cannot unlock the doors in the
passage with the key, so she so
she searches for another way out.

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Question 1: What is the MAIN reason Claudia gives Lauren the framed picture?
A) to help take her mind off packing
B) to help her decorate her new house
C) to help her remember their friendship
D) to help her think of the fun lake trip

Question 2: A synonym for the word embraced in paragraph 4 is
11)

A) groaned.
B) hugged.
C) sighed.
D) sobbed.

Paragraph: sea captains looked at the night sky as they sailed on the ocean they needed to know which way was north. There is one star that is always true north. It’s called the North Star. It guided sailors in the way.

Whats the main idea ?
Detail 1
Detail 2

Select the correct answer
Is this a SENTENCE?
I went to the party with.
A.
Yes
B.
No

Read Fatima’s paragraph. Having moved up north just last year, I experienced my first snowstorm this past winter. At first, the snow twirled gently, lightly dusting the street, cars, and trees with snowy frosting. Then, the snow became a curtain, blinding my view so that I felt cocooned from the outside world. When the snow stopped, ice coated the trees and branches clacked like chattering teeth. Which sentence will Fatima’s teacher most likely ask her to revise? Having moved up north just last year, I experienced my first snowstorm this past winter. At first, the snow twirled gently, lightly dusting the street, cars, and trees with snowy frosting. Then, the snow became a curtain, blinding my view so that I felt cocooned from the outside world. When the snow stopped, ice coated the trees and branches clacked like chattering teeth.

Explain the differences of;
Your and You're

Sarah is a veteran of the Iraq war who suffered three serious blast-related concussions. Her primary TBI symptoms are frequent headaches, irritability, and light sensitivity. She also has symptoms of PTSD, including flashbacks and an exaggerated startle response. She reports having difficulty managing her anger and difficulty distinguishing between rude people and potentially threatening people. Answer the following questions: How might these challenges make Sarah more likely to break the law? How might these challenges make Sarah more likely to be victimized? What services might help Sarah avoid involvement with the criminal justice system?

What is the dominant form of sound repetition in this line from "The Fish"?
but shallower, and yellowed

Select the best answer from the choices provided.
A.
alliteration
B.
assonance
C.
consonance
D.
rhyme

Question 14 of 25
2 Points
A student is asked to write a research paper on the effects of the Works
Progress Administration, which was a New Deal program during the Great
Depression.
Which best explains the benefit of using an advanced search for this
information?
A. It will lead to sources that discuss other New Deal programs.
B. It will eliminate lost time finding information about other New Deal
programs.
C. It will help the student locate facts about the causes of the Great
Depression.
O D. It will help uncover criticisms of the New Deal program.
SUBMIT

What type of evidence would support the rebuttal? Check all that apply.
Rebuttal: It is true that Bob Dylan has published traditional poetry and prose. However, one book of poetry and one memoir would not qualify him for the prize. The prize was awarded based on his songwriting, which does not qualify as literature.
statistics about the number of books written by past recipients of the Nobel Prize in Literature
a review that an acclaimed literary professional wrote about Bob Dylan’s book of poetry
a quotation by a literary scholar explaining why Dylan’s lyrics are not poetry
quotations from both Tarantula and Chronicles: Volume One
a quotation from a Nobel judge explaining that the prize was awarded because of Dylan’s lyrics

Read the following excerpt from the article "Vision, Voice and the Power of Creation: An Author Speaks Out," by T. A. Barron, and answer the question that follows:

Another way to tap the power of imagination is through place. My own background as a writer is rooted in nature, having grown up reading Henry David Thoreau, Rachel Carson, and John Muir long before I ever dipped into Madeleine L'Engle, Lloyd Alexander, Ursula Le Guin, E. B. White, or J.R.R. Tolkien. My early writings were really nature journals; at nine, I wrote a complete biography—of a tree. (It was a once-majestic chestnut tree not far from my home.) So it should come as no surprise that I view place as much more than just a setting for a story. It is, in truth, another form of character, no less alive and complex, mysterious and contradictory, than the richest character in human form. the author writes that he "wrote a complete biography- of a tree." what message is implied about the tree with this statement?

A: the author couldn't think of any other subject for a biography.

B:the author didn't think a partial biography was enough.

C:the author didn't want to speak for the tree.

D:the author believed the tree had a life story, like a person ​

Which of the following is the best replacement for the underlined word in the sentence? The tempo of his new job was much
quicker than that of his old job.
pace
c. pattern
b. speed
d. all of the above
a.

In the following sentence, what is the meaning of the word buoyed?
The
audience's cheers buoyed her spirits so much she wanted to burst with joy.
•swallowed
•lifted up
•depressed
•washed over

Dairy entry ,about you met your old friend in a mall after two years...

List the major battles in Beowulf. State the battle you think is the most important, and then use reasons and examples from the poem to explain why.

No one ever got the right answer for this