i made this story for a school essay plz check over my writing so i can get a good grade thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry if there are some spelling errors or stuff like that i will fix them.
THE WAY WE ARE
I had always been shy as a child some may have even called me weird I barely had any friends in fact I had none but that all changed. it was my second semester maybe in the early April at my new school prince high I had always picked the seat in the back corner on the left side and normally no one would sit next to me. almost hallway through the class a girl busted through the door I guess you could say she looked ill very skinny and weak in the knee's she trembled to the seat next to me I looked at her as if she was crazy no one has ever sat next to me before did she even know who I was? she looked around the class everyone was whispering and pointing at her she looked at her desk ashamed of herself. the teacher finally spoke up " I see you are late...." " its Amelia miss" said the girl still looking at her desk. " I expect you not to come that late again Amelia I was told to expect great things from you, know back to work class" the girl started to slowly look up at the board but then turned to me. " are you an outcast to?" "I guess you could say I am." " perfect lets meet up after school in the front near the pick up line" she said with a grin I was so confused what was she planning in that head of hers. it was five thirty I had been waiting for more than twenty three minutes where was she? she ran out tears in her eyes and then she tripped a boy came out of the school with gun in his hand bared to the girls head. " why are you doing this please don't hurt me" tears where running down her face " don't you want to be freed from this world as sick as you are we might as well say you have cancer am I right I know I am don't think of this as I'm doing it just to do it don't you wanna end this pain all this suffer that you have faced over the years" he said laugh with a sick look on his face " your just like me sick so whatcha say lets end this together." i didn't know what to do i stood there in fear but then something happened to my body my legs started moving they where running towards the boy but then he panicked and pointed the gun towards me his finger on the trigger i was only a couple feet away from him. his finger slowly pulling back the trigger i saw a very faint silver bullet come out and shoot me in the stomach i fell back clutching my stomach screaming with pain and then everything went dark. she saw me close my eyes and ran over to my body holding me in her arms but it was to late the boy picked up the gun again and put it to the girls head he pulled the trigger the last thing i could see was her face sickly ill I looked at her will a smile and then she collapsed the last picture of her holding me in her arms.
THE END
Answer:
I think it's good
Explanation:
But melodramatic. o.0
Answer:
You do have some grammatical errors here... But I'll help you! You can copy and paste this if you need to. All you needed to do was this (below)
I rewrote it, but with little to no errors. Its still your story.
I changed it to:
THE WAY WE ARE
" I had always been shy as a child and some might have even called me weird. I barely had any friends in fact, I had none. But all that changed. It was my second semester in early April at my new school, Prince High. I had always picked the seat in the back corner, on the left side. Almost no one would sit next to me. Almost halfway through class, a girl busted through the door. I guess you could say she looked ill, very skinny, and weak in the knees. She trembled to the seat next to me as I looked at her as if she was crazy. "No one has ever sat next to me before. Did she even know who I was?", I thought. She looked around the class and everyone was whispering and pointing at her. She looked at her desk, ashamed of herself. The teacher finally spoke up. "I see you are late....", she said. "It's Amelia miss.", said the girl, still looking at her desk. "I expect you not to come that late again, Amelia. I was told to expect great things from you. Now back to work, class." Said the teacher. The girl started to slowly look up at the board but then turned to me. "Are you an outcast too?" She asked me. "I guess you could say I am." I told her. "Perfect, lets meet up after school in the front near the pick-up line." She said with a grin. I was so confused. What was she planning in that head of hers? It was five thirty and I had been waiting for more than twenty minutes. Where was she? She ran out with tears in her eyes and tripped and fell. A boy came out of the school with a gun in his hand and put it to the girls head. "Why are you doing this? Please don't hurt me!". Amelia pleaded as tears ran down her face. "Don't you want to be freed from this world? As sick as you are we might as well say you have cancer, am I right? I know I am. Don't think of this as me doing it just to do it. Don't you want to end all this pain, all this suffering that you have faced over the years?", he said laughing with a sick look on him face. "You're just like me, sick. So what do you say? Lets end this together." Said Amelia. I didn't know what to do so I just stood there in fear. But then something happened to my body. My legs started moving! They were running towards the boy! He panicked and pointed the gun toward me and put his finger on the trigger. His finger slowly pulling back on the trigger, i saw a very faint silver bullet coming towards me. It shot me in the stomach and I fell back clutching my stomach and screaming in pain. Then, everything went dark. Amelia saw me close my eyes and ran over to my body, but it was too late. The boy picked up the gun again, put it to the girls head, and pulled the trigger. The last thing I could see was her face. Sickly ill, I looked at her with a warm smile. Then, she collapsed. The last picture of her holding me in her arms.
THE END
Explanation:
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Write one page supporting your view on virtual learning as a choice from now on.
Can stories have the same power as speeches when it comes to fighting for an issue? Explain your opinion. Can you think of specific novels or short stories that advocated for a cause or issue? Minimum 6-8 sentences.
Answer:
Yes
Explanation:
Yes, stories can be just as powerful by providing a different perspective on a scenario and showing what can happen if certain events take place or if we allow certain issues to persist. For example, in the novel "The Man in the High Castle", the novel depicts a world where the Nazi Army was allowed to take over the world. Even though it is a fictional scenario, it still shows what the world can turn into if we allow hate to grow and spread. This can be very powerful and allow individuals to understand the dangers of not fighting for a good cause or issue.
In the second sentence of the final paragraph, the author justifies his determination to “see in the signs of the time hope of humanity for peace" by
A
providing statistical data in support of his opinion
B
gesturing to the unthinkable consequences of holding the opposite opinion
C
drawing attention to historical evidence that has previously been ignored
D
pointing out a flaw in the line of reasoning of those who disagree with him
E
questioning the moral integrity of those who disagree with him
please write out answer to avoid misunderstandings, thanks :)
Answer:
B
Explanation:
Gesturing to the unthinkable conveniences of holding the opposite opinion
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Answer:
the preposition is (at)
hello I love u any one
Answer:
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Explanation:
why doesn't the mother show her good interest to her son's story from the last voyage of the ghost ship
Answer:
The mother does not show any good interest to her son because she thinks that her son is imagining things and believing on it so she didn't show any interest on her son about the ship he saw and the boy promised to show her the next march but the boys mother get heart attack so she couldn't see the ship which was even larger than that of their village
In "The Last Voyage of the Ghost Ship" the boy's mother doesn't show interest in the story that her son tells because this story is too far-fetched and unreal, she thinks the boy is fantasizing and imagining non-existent things.
"The last voyage of the ghost ship" is a story written by Gabriel Garcia Marques. In this story the author makes extensive use of magical realism, which is a literary genre where magical elements are represented in the real world.
In "The last voyage of the ghost ship" we are introduced to a boy, who when observing the horizon, sees a ship and a captain that appears and disappears constantly, when the boy goes to investigate about this ship, he realizes that this ship and his captain leave no tracks and no evidence of their existence, but the boy always sees them.
He tells about it to his mother, but she doesn't pay attention to the words he says and shows no interest, because he believes that this is too fanciful a story and that the boy is making it up.
You can find more information about magical realism, a genre often used by Gabriel Garcia Marques, at the link below:
https://brainly.com/question/19963556?referrer=searchResults
What does the phrase " I've studied whiteness the way I would a foreign language" suggest about Conley?
A. He did not take his whiteness at face value but explored it
B. He was interested in researching identity at a young age
C. He viewed his race as Ana inferior aspect of his identity
D. He felt detached from his identity as a white person
Answer:
B. He was interested in researching identity at a young age
Explanation:
44 What is the main idea of the article?
F
New Zealanders helped a lost emperor penguin return to the Antarctic.
G A zoo in New Zealand saved the life of an ailing emperor penguin.
H An emperor penguin traveled thousands of miles to reach New Zealand.
J
New Zealanders turned an emperor penguin into an instant celebrity.
On overage, ______ customer spends about RM 40 in a bookshop daily.
1.a.
2.an.
3. the
why might a journalist fabricate a story
Answer:
To make the story more interesting
To make the story fit a certain narrative
To spread propoganda
Explanation:
The journalist might have certain motived for fabricating a story.
Answer:
They might fabricate the story because they want the story to seem more interesting than what it actually is.
How might the events of WWII relate to LOTF? (Lord of the Flies)
Answer:
World War II has a great amount on influence in Lord of the Flies. The boys on the island are similar to some soldiers from WWII because they have taken away their reality and start to have traumas. Ralph and Jack are symbolic for England and Germany since they both fight over power.
Explanation:
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Which punctuation mark belongs in the blank within the following
sentence: Although today is Tuesday __ it feels like a Monday. *
Answer:
comma
Explanation:
there is a pause in sentence
Why is "The cat is a shadow" a metaphor, not a simile?
Why is "The poem speaks to me" a personification?
Why is "I typed at lightning speed” a hyperbole?
What could a skull be a symbol of?
What is the purpose of each figure of speech? {What is it trying to tell you?)
Words came pouring out of her mouth.
He has the body of a string bean.
My dog is a million times smarter than yours.
/ move like a snail.
My legs refused to move.
Identify each example as figurative {F) or literal {L).
_
16. I studied so much my head might explode.
21. She broke his heart .
_
17. I am so hyper today!
_
22. That TV is so loud I can't hear you!
_
18. Find the answer in the dictionary.
_
23. Reach for the stars. You can do it!
_
19. What do you know - he pulled it off!
_
24. This pen is not cooperating.
_
20 . Those brownies are calling my name.
_
25. He caught the thief red-handed .
Answer:
see below
Explanation:
1: A simile is something that says one object is like another, while a metaphor is something that poetically says something is like something else. You're not comparing the cat to a shadow, but rather saying that the cat is the shadow.
The poem speaks is personification of the poem, as poems do not speak, but you're giving an inanimate object human like qualitites, which is personification.
I typed at lightning speed is a hyperbole because hyperbole is the use of exaggeration and unlikely scenarios. It is impossible for someone to actually type at the speed of lightning, therefore making it a hyperbole.
Answer: stan doja cat and megan the stallion for clear skin
Explanation: just have an amazing week. dont let anyone bring you down. know your worth. ily x
Hat is a defining characteristic of foreshadowing? It contains a reference to something readers will recognize. It uses vivid language that appeals to sight, sound, touch, taste, or smell. It aides the reader in predicting future events in the story. It provides an extended metaphor that continues until the end.
Answer:
Option-C (It aides the reader in predicting future events in the story)
Explanation:
Foreshadowing is a literary device which is used by the writers as a hint or indicate what will happen in the future story or event. Foreshadowing provides a suggestion about the future story and not the outcome of the story.
This could be expressed through the direct clue, indirect clue, symbolism and prophecy in the story.
In the given question, the foreshadowing will aid the reader in picturing the events that have to happen in the future.
Thus, Option-C is the correct answer.
Which of the five senses does the following propaganda statement appeal to?
______________________________________
Imagine reaching you hand into a big bowl filled with a mountain of hot, fluffy, crunchy popcorn smothered with rich, creamy butter.
______________________________________
smell
taste
touch
sight
sound
Answer:All except sound and taste I believe
Explanation:
Because you can see how delicious it looks you can smell how good it is and your touching it in the process
A strong argument is made when the person . . .
Answer:
is depressed
........
Answer:
A strong argument is made when the person is able to back up their points with reliable evidence and is confident in what they say.
Explanation:
Summary of the info graphic explain the graphic using complete sentences
Hi mates plz help me with English and I need help asap plz
Answer:
do complete sentences that is really important
What is point of view as it relates to culture?
A. a belief or idea that a group of people share
B. a type of narrator's perspective, such as first, second, or third person
C. a way of noticing others' traits
D. a feeling of self-importance
Answer:
C. a way of noticing others' traits
Explanation:
Because A (a belief or idea that a group of people share) is what cultures mean
& B & C are wrong
bribe and wonder in a sentence (use both words in the same sentence*
Answer:
I wonder if my manager for my job knows that he is going to bribe me with a cool deal or a promotion.
Explanation:
I wonder if my she is going to bribe me with a chocolate or something else.
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Answer:
13. couldn't touch the ball with your hands
Answer:
the ans might be
11. b
12.a
13.b
What is the authors likely purpose in this passage?
Answer:
What passage?
Explanation:
Answer:
the authors purpose in a passage can be to inform
persuade
or entertain
Explanation:
when the author writes an INFORMATIVE passage it means they are trying to teach you something an example of one would be this i am writing down things to teach you something
when they write a PERSUASIVE passage they are trying to get you to believe or think the same things as them an example of one would be a book or something telling you why a book or movie is the best book ever
When the author is writing a book that is ment for ENTERTAINING they are trying to give you a good story to entertain you. an example of one would be like Harry potter or ramie nytingale
Which phrase from the passage is an example of a SIMILE?
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A)
her basket overflowed
B)
shimmered like a star
showered Cam with everything
D)
a stunning blue and silver dress
Answer:
shimmered like a star
Explanation:
It compares a star to something by using "like."
How does Lady Macbeth first hear the news of the witches prophesies?
Question 6 options:
Received a letter from Macbeth
The witches came to see her
She overheard the conversation with the witches.
A messenger told her
Answer:
Received a letter from Macbeth.
Explanation:
William Shakespeare's "Macbeth" revolves around the rise and fall of Macbeth. Through murderous acts and nefarious plans, Macbeth tried to become the king of Scotland, aided by his wife and the knowledge of the three witches who had prophesied his rise and eventual destruction.
In Act 1 scene v, we see Lady Macbeth reading a letter from her husband Macbeth. In it, he told her about the three witches and their prophecy and how it became true for he had just been declared "Thane of Cawdor".
Thus, Lady Macbeth learned about the prophecies from her husband's letter.
people are like poppies, they're beautiful but poisonous
does that make sense? cuz i have to turn it in for today
Answer:
I say no but my friend says yes
Explanation:
Answer:
yes it makes sense
Explanation:
help help help help help help help help help help help
Answer:
D
Explanation:
This sentence is irrelevant
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Please help with this
Answer:
the correct answer is actually c
if you check A,B and D they don't make any sense
Select the correct texts in the passage.
In the adapted excerpt from Herman Melville's short story "The Lightning-Rod Man," which two statements best support an objective summary
of the excerpt?
Answer:
"You pretended envoy extraordinary and an agent to and from Jupiter Tonans,"
"In thunder as in sunshine, I stand at ease"
Explanation:
The two sentences shown above are those that would represent an objective summary of the text presented. This is because an objective summary must be done succinctly, with clear language and, as the name says, objective; that effectively represents the original text by displaying the main idea that the original text presents. This summary should be short, as additional information has been deleted.
Answer:
"You pretended envoy extraordinary and an agent to and from Jupiter Tonans,"
Who has empowered you, you Tetzel, to peddle round your indulgences from divine ordinations? The hairs of our heads are numbered, and the days of our lives. In thunder as in sunshine, I stand at ease.
Explanation:
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morning people how are ya'll doing
Sarah and Ashley giggled and whispered all night.
What type of sentence is this?