PLEASE HELP
Read the rough draft of a student’s conclusion to an argumentative editorial.

(1) Year-round schooling would help student achievement. (2) Not so much information would have to be crammed into nine months. (3) Furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce "learning loss” and the additional time wasted at the beginning of each academic year to reteach previously learned material. (4) It is clear that year-round schooling helps students learn and retain more. (5) The United States is not the only country to experiment with a year-round school schedule. (6) Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and see that students in these schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. (7) It is about time that we replaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.

Which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone?

Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, this theory is wrong because students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, they would admit defeat if only they would do their research and find that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to study their facts and acknowledge that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.

Answer: Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.

Explanation:

Any argumentative editorial should always maintain a respectful tone to convey a point positively and affirmatively, based on evidence rather than personal believes or opinions. A counterargument should not attack those who differ from our position but provide evidence to disprove their claims.

Phrases such as "these people need to open their eyes", "they would admit defeat if only they would do their research", and "these people need to study their facts" are baseless accusations of researchers not doing their jobs properly. The best way to make a counterclaim against the opposite idea would be to establish supporting evidence, which is accomplished with the phrase "studies consistently reveal that".

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A. Darwinism
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Which of the following is the best revision of sentence 4?

"We were students, we were friends, we were influences, and we were the influenced."
A.
We were students, friends, influences, and we were the influenced, too.
B.
We were students and we were friends, and we were influences, and we were influenced.
C.
We were students, friends, influences, and the influenced.
D.
We were students and friends, and we were influences, and we were influenced.

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T.J. thinks that Cassie is “Uncle Tomming" Lillian Jean. What clues are there that Cassie
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A. Allow for breaks anytime he needs them but work hard

B. Break the time into chucks, each lasting for 50 minutes.

C. Use a stop watch to time himself, and work for 2 hours and 30 minutes.

D. Work for an hour, take a break, repeat, and work for 30 minutes.

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a.memoirs
b. cave painting
c. legal records
d. all of the above

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Read the story below. Underline all the METAPHORS you find.
The Haircut
When I woke up on Saturday, mom said I was a sheepdog with my long,
shaggy hair, and it was time for me to get my hair cut. When I looked at her, she
was a zebra, half hidden behind the drapes of my overgrown bangs. I couldn't
help it. I laughed. She was right, my hair had to be cut.
The barber's chair was a tower, and he pumped it higher and higher. I
didn't really mind. I was an explorer, looking at the world in a whole new way.
The pieces of hair on the floor were an exotic carpet of strange brown fibers
that criss-crossed in a crazy pattern. The floor was an odd new planet, and I was
an astronaut looking down from above. The barber pumped the chair again, and
I was a rocket/coming in for a landing. I couldn't believe the adventure was over
so soon.
On the way home, we stopped at the store to buy some milk. Unfortunately,
there was some amazing sale going on at the time. We were tiny fish swimming
in a sea of people. I couldn't wait to get out of there and go home. The drive
home was a frustrating eexperience, because the holiday traffic had turned the
street into a parking lot. I hope it's a long time before I'm a sheepdog again!​

Frederick recently took a long sea journey and the ship he traveled on had an infestation of rats. When he returned home to Constantinople, he felt tired and achy. About a week later he developed weird bumps. He did not seek medical treatment and eventually experienced bleeding from his nose and under his skin.
Analyze the chart and diagnose the type of plague Frederick is suffering from.
a.
Bubonic
b.
Septicemic
c.
Pneumonic
d.
Either a or b

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Name at least one reason Benjamin Franklin gives as to why European colonists should respect Native Americans.

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In a story about horse racing, a jockey develops an especially close bond with his horse. Tragically, the horse becomes badly injured and has to be put down at the end.
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A woman discovers to her amazement that her cat can talk. The cat begins to reveal secrets about all of her neighbors.

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summarize the plot of the myth "The Beginning of the Maasai"​

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Which of the following strategies DOES NOT involve using word relationships to figure out the meaning of a word?
breaking up a word into its roots and affixes
linking causes and effects
matching a word with its antonym
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determining how a part connects to the whole

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In "A Harrowing Escape," how does Cornelia respond when she is rushed out of the castle?

She joins in defending her home from enemy soldiers.


She scolds the guardsman for his rude behavior.


She frantically searches for her parents.


She goes along with the guardsman

Surveys are often used to help predict future
events, such as election outcomes. How might
these surveys affect the outcome of the events?
Choose a recent election, such as a 2008 state
primary election to choose a presidential can-
didate or the national election for president.
Use the Internet to research how pre-election
surveys and polls might have affected election
results. Write a short report that summarizes
your findings.

The excerpt from The Outsiders is written in
tense from a
point of view




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