In the second sentence, the would most likely use a w instead of a v for volleyball because a w in German is pronounced like a v. In that same sentence (the second one), the term “i comes before e except after c” does not apply. For German, it is always ei. I don’t know anything else about the second and first sentence, but I hoped that helped some.
Answer:
In the first sentence it should be hore (with an umlaut on the o) and there should be a capitol for Freizeit.
In the second one Volleyball is with a capitol V and it is spiele not spiellien. Also, the Freizeit should have a capitol F too.
I'm pretty sure they are right :)